Megan - 5/5 Responses
Megan, your responses tend to be a bit short, but they're getting there. Sounds like Anya has a pretty two faced peer group. BTW, a lot of people keep their illnesses to themselves because they don't want to burden others. Does this play into Anya's decision, or is it simply embarassment?
Justine - 3/5 Responses
Justine, we really need to work on development of these responses. You're going to need to elaborate. This is where the thinking comes in. For example, where are there people of the type you describe in your last response? What is the setting like? Does it create a mood? Represent anything larger than itself?
Julia - 5/5 Responses
Nice work this quarter. Your responses are developed and well thought out. And three books? You go. I wish I could bottle what you have and distribute it!
Shawn - 1/5 Responses
Shawn, this is the second ball you've dropped. You've got a lot going on upstairs, and this effort is unacceptable. d
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